POST NUMBER 250!!! How exciting that it ends up on this news?!
The joy of finishing a story can never be understated! The relief can be cut into eight and shared among family. No lie. I started and finished 85% of it in November last year, and couldn't figure out how it would end. On, actually that's a lie. I knew, I just couldn't write it. The story was like "and what?" to me, mocking me each time I opened it on Google Docs. And work imploded, so I was doing eleven hour days (I know some people do a lot more, but for me - this was looooooooooong) and I had no energy to be sucked into the emotional vacuum of this tale. I'm sure I've posted this excerpt before, but it seems to have vanished. (I'm watching you Facebook...)
It hasn't got a final title yet, I've been calling it by the initials of the main characters JMAZ.
Jamie or by his Spanish name Jaime
Mical bitch who's a witch
Aaron Jamie's best friend who happens to be a werewolf (hence the name puppy)
And Zlatan who is possibly my most favourite secondary character ever. I love him like I love Hernando from Sense8.
My iPhone repeatedly changed JMAZ to Hamaz, frightening me deeply. Just so you know what has given me so much joy to shove to the side to write anything else, here's a snippet of the hero's best friend getting in the heroine's face. Trying anyway...
Aaron
marched up to Mical and said, “What the fuck are you doing?”
She
tilted her head to the side. “Aaron! Looking as beastly as ever.” Her midnight
eyes ran over him critically. “Didn’t fancy shaving?”
His
face flushed with embarrassment. “Why would you…” He leaned across the bar and
hissed, “You coming back here… What the fuck? This wasn’t the plan!”
Mical
shrugged. “Change of plan.”
“Says
who?”
“Says
me, little puppy. I asked for your help, because you care about Jamie.” She
wrinkled her nose, looking him up and down. “A little more than is healthy for
one of your description. So, do me a favour. Shut up, back off, go away. And if
you’re a good boy, I’ll leave you a bowl of Pedigree Chum for you.”
Aaron
backed off, too aware of what she knew and what she could do to him. What she’d
done to him before. His own anger pushed him forward once more. “You don’t get
to come here and fuck everything up. Not without an explanation. And not if you
love Jamie the way you swear you do.”
Her
eyes flashed and at last, the true person behind the shiny, glossy model-like
beauty began to emerge, in the lengthening of her chin, the engorgement of her
eyes and the tightness in her lips. “Never question my feelings again. I’ve
warned you before. Or do you fancy walking on all fours tonight?”
Aaron
shrank from her. She wouldn’t dare! “It’s not… It’s not that time.”
“Only
because I haven’t made it that time.” She leaned back and her face returned to
normal. “Now, you can have a pint, but you need to behave yourself.”
“I’ll
be over there. Waiting. Whatever you say, you owe me.” He stared at her until
she lowered her gaze, his heart beating frantically in fear. Of course she knew
he was right. Why would she deny that, when she knew she’d done a complete
U-turn on what they’d agreed?
Mical
handed over a pint of bitter. “I suppose I do.”
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